We love reading your Writing. We love the describing words you used in your Beach writing. My favourite part is the 'wind blowing across my face' another cool part is, 'dipping my feet in the cool water.' This is great writing.
The sense beach writing, we like the part, 'the beach sounds like people shouting and having fun. Well done Room 9 at Glen Taylor for awesome sharing of your learning. From Room 3 at Glenbrae school.
We love reading your Writing. We love the describing words you used in your Beach writing. My favourite part is the 'wind blowing across my face' another cool part is, 'dipping my feet in the cool water.' This is great writing.
ReplyDeleteThe sense beach writing, we like the part, 'the beach sounds like people shouting and having fun.
Well done Room 9 at Glen Taylor for awesome sharing of your learning.
From Room 3 at Glenbrae school.