One day a little rabbit was walking to his friend's house to play.
Suddenly, clouds came out and started surrounding him in the middle of the forest. He didn’t know where to go so he just followed his little shadow. After a while of following his shadow, his shadow began to get bigger and bigger. He decided to run as fast as he could with his tiny little legs, but no matter how fast he ran, his shadow wouldn’t go away. After a few minutes, he decided to ignore it and just walk to his friend's house, Oscar, the dragon.
After a couple of hours, he noticed that his shadow was still following him, so he decided he was not going to ignore it… instead, he was going to fight it. First, the little rabbit went to find some objects to make a weapon. After searching for objects around in the forest, he found some great looking sharp sticks, so he picked them up and tried to put them together with the other objects that he found. A few minutes later, he was done with the weapon. He called it the fighting stick master weapon.
After a while, he saw his shadow and he started to fight it. trying and trying, he got tired and gave up. He walked to his friend’s house feeling sad. When he arrived at his friend's house, Oscar(the dragon) asked him. “What's wrong little rabbit?” So the little rabbit replied. “ I tried to fight my shadow but no matter how hard I hit it with my fighting stick master weapon, it wouldn’t work!”Oscar the dragon explained to the little white rabbit why he couldn’t fight his shadow. After an hour of talking, the little rabbit finally understood why he couldn’t fight his shadow and said, “Thank you Oscar!”
Next morning, he went to play at the park. After Oscar’s explanation, the shadow seemed to be friendly. Since that time the little white rabbit never got bored as he could always play with his new wonderful friend!
Wonderful story Neomi! I loved how you thought of a problem, its resolution and also added some interesting events to make your story more exciting. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteWow Neomi what wonderful writing Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteThank you Liana
ReplyDeleteI love the interesting words you are using in your writing Neomi! Your story is really good!
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